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Thursday, 4 June 2015

SPEEDWRITE: INFORMATION REPORT ON STARS
  




This is my ABC world cloud, for my star 






Today’s learning focus- WALT to write an information report on stars in 40 minutes.






My Information Report Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
My heading/title:


  • is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)


My opening paragraph/introduction:


  • says what my report is about in a clear way


  • gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification


  • outlines the main features of the subject


My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:


  • have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)


  • are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject


  • give detailed information (factual descriptions)


  • include specific, technical vocabulary


  • are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)


  • may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information


My end paragraph/conclusion:


  • draws the report together/sums up my main points


  • may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found












Begin Writing Here:


[Heading/Title of Information Report]

[Introduction]


Life cycle
The huge clouds of dust and is called Nebula. Star are born in a great cloud of hydrogen gas and dust called Nebulae.The Sun is about 5 billion year old.When a star is about to die there atoms turn into a heavier chemical.Star seem to be fixed in the sky and differnet timed.The star are



Type of star
A very hot mass called a ‘white dwarf’.There is a star called orion hunter.There is a star called a red super giant.The Sun is a type of star and is a closet star to Earth.There is a star called Betelgeuse.



Appearance
Most star are too small to shine as bright as the sun.Some star are big or small.Small:cool star,big:hot and brighter.Our Sun is a Middle sized star.Star are differnet colours and they also different sizes.


1 comment:

  1. I love the Appearance about the stars. I really like how you put it together to remind us about Matariki. Do you celebrate Matariki?

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